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Poem #2

May 13, 2008

heres the second poem that i wrote it was for school (P.S this one doesnt have a title either lol)

I see you smile You are talking to your friends But looking at me My friends say that you like me I tell them I like you too

You are standing there And you start looking my way I start feeling hot I see you turning bright red I try to talk but freeze up

Were both standing there I look into your brown eyes You look into mine I know that you want to talk But your just like me and freeze

I give you a hug You put your arm around me Your not letting go We hold on to eachother Everyone talks, we dont care

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      Posted 1 year ago by Dvlboi

      very very emotional i love it

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      pretty hot............................... loved it... i love poetry..

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      Posted 1 year ago by JeanieAnn

      That was great....love the imagery.

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      wow! wondweful words

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      Pretty wicked.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Loyal_Jan

      awsome!

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      wait is it a friend or wat??? and its good

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      Posted 1 year ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Thats really cute i love it.