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what do u think

February 21, 2008

hey u check this out ........

ok so i must write a sonnet(long poem) and i wrote one so give me ur opinion well here it is:

you are compared to candy you seem hard as rock inside your sweet and dandy your heart is a lock no one dares to unwrap
there are so many flavors that are on the map but only one i savor your always in my pocket or in my sweet heart thee others may mock it but we will visit marts they will have many treats but none are like thee

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    • Photo of Willturner Willturner
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      If life gives you lemons, make lemonade, then find someone who's life is giving them vodka, and have a party.
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      Posted 1 year ago by Willturner

      you HAVE to put that in for my March Challenge, it's under the name Febuary winner of the loyal challenge (it would be the ONLY poetry so far)

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      Posted 1 year ago by swimgirl12

      dude..i had 2 write a sonnet 4 english, and mine was about criss!

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      Posted 1 year ago by randa_angellover4life

      Yeah, so I got an X-ray today and they found you in my heart. The dr. said if I took you out, I would die cuz I could not live without you…. Give this heart to every person u care about including me if u care. Try to collect 12. It’s not easy…

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      LOYAL 4 EVER!!!!
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      Posted 1 year ago by loyalbrianne

      Hey wats up?

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      Posted 1 year ago by loyalbrianne

      nuttin much u?

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      Posted 1 year ago by ashleyangel613

      i LOVE it! it's so creative and i can definitely understand the meaning behind each part of it. awesome job! ♥

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      I've felt the hate rise up in me Kneel down and clear the stone of leaves I wander out where you can't see Inside my shell, I wait and bleed
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      Posted 1 year ago by thecrow32

      wow nice poem girl. ur poem .!http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh262/kenshing209/Rock.gif! do u have more.

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      Posted 1 year ago by DalanJe

      I find it a very sweet interpretation. It should prove interesting!

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      Posted 1 year ago by LOYAL_JULIE

      I think it was really good.Y don't u like it?

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      Posted 1 year ago by Code_of_the_Arts

      So luvin!! Criss is so sweet and u really managed 2 translate dat in ur poem!! gr8 job!!!