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untilted<3 a poem

September 2, 2008

begining this night as i sit by the light of the lamp over my right shoulder ....i am pondering and thinking ...waiting and replaying what goes thru my head ...realizing that things are much harder to say....sweetly i say in a dream...softly i dance and make believe...SILENCE is all i hear....but i know the that i am here..in need of this....peace and tranquillity

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      Posted 1 year ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Cool i like it.

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      hey send me a friend request and please comment my first blog on the top of my profile page. it would mean alot. ~destiny

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      Posted 1 year ago by Shivam_Loyal

      hey loyal! that's a really cooool poem.i like ur talent kept this up and write more.

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      Posted 1 year ago by mickangel

      really cool, i like it. i like prose better than traditional poetry. keep at it girl!!