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May 8, 2009

poem basically i wrote but i cunt think of a title so comment with ideas and i will pick one in exactly 4 days

too much too fast all i want is to for this to be in the past that it wasnt me not no more i wish things were the way they were before. peaple ask how i am but still i answer im fine before i walk out into a personal firing line wishing that they would make it quick but they dont there triggers stick so agian i get made to wait in the land of dessperation and hate i must get out im here agiant my will untill they give me my fucking pill then i go i drift to sleep in land where all my memories i keep i jump and i leap from thought to thought and heart to heart this is my art my specaility dont you understand i ave this amazing ability to keep me free from this place its just like a race its my time and im face to face with end of the race this is it my fall from grace

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    • Photo of mialo mialo
      mialo
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      i've looked into the water and i see my seen. my pride my worry>>> how could this be
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      Posted 6 months ago by mialo

      "moment of despare". sounds goood or either "tired of being". or man i have alot lol

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      christara
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      Hi everyone
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      Posted 7 months ago by christara

      I have 3 title ideas.The first one is In The Line Of Fire, the 2nd is Land Of Dessperation, This is my walk of art.

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      owen
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      representing all forces of resistance in the middle east
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      Posted 7 months ago by owen

      from this land .. 2 this land /

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      owen
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      nabatieh , LB
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      representing all forces of resistance in the middle east
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      Posted 7 months ago by owen

      flashes

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      sorcerer0
      Male, 19
      Death Valley, CA
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      the task ahead of you is never as strong as the power within you -Tony Hardy
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      Posted 7 months ago by sorcerer0

      or maybe "fates destiny is death" or "smiles we left behind us"

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      sorcerer0
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      Death Valley, CA
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      the task ahead of you is never as strong as the power within you -Tony Hardy
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      Posted 7 months ago by sorcerer0

      not very good but wat about: it is time to rebel from the chains that hold us back? or: if you went back in time and you saw me, id only be a shell of my former self? your call, brother.

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      magicgirl08
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      Posted 7 months ago by magicgirl08

      how about chasing memory or mind memorys or memorys in the line of fire

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      LoyalForever18
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      Posted 7 months ago by LoyalForever18

      The past and now the present i dont know really bro