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Pouring out

May 12, 2009

poem

i sit and i plead and i beg as i bleed. I beg for more as it rain starts to pour. I walk out of the room and into my doom. The rain washing the blood away but the pain is here to stay. I get down on one knee like you asked me. I look into sky as the rain falls into my eye. I kneal there in silence waiting for the deal. The final call is made your the one who gets paid i close my eyes and look down to floor. I dont want this anymore. My final thoughts go through my head then your bullet joins them. I lay on the floor. I am dead. one bullet to the head. No pain no gain. Nothing gained just pain.

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    • Photo of mialo mialo
      mialo
      Female, 16
      kayenta, AZ
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      i've looked into the water and i see my seen. my pride my worry>>> how could this be
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      Posted 6 months ago by mialo

      hey awesome poem. i reallly liked it. you if i compare mine to yours. definitly yours would win. lol mine is a beginners

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      christara
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      Hi everyone
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      Posted 7 months ago by christara

      I do like the poem,kinda hit home with me a little.

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      magicgirl08
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      Posted 7 months ago by magicgirl08

      wow this is amazing work really is very deep you have a amazing gift with your words its a true art