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does anyone like this poem?

June 5, 2008

just wondering if this poem I wrote is any good

Illusion By: Ashleigh

Can you imagine living in space? Could you imagine not having an arm or a face? Or maybe living in a world of Magic and illusion? Could you bare to imagine not having a family or friend? And if we will make it to the end? We don’t know what’s in store for u No one can tell the future, not anyone I tell you, if someone wants you to believe him it’s true you’ll fall under a spell and start to imagine and well….. You could never come back it’s just and illusion no one can return to reality with the thought of riches and gold in their head they will just live a lie and never return to their wonderful human mind.

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      TooStupid
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      Posted 1 year ago by TooStupid

      (1)~~I love the poem. I love people as yourself that gets deep into life. I don't write poems but as much as I help and constantly think abt life every second of every day..See, i can put myself in other peoples shows. If you can imagine me being a fighter and I have won 9 fights out 9..I haven't lost a fight yet and I own my own company. So with all that said, I have to be intimadating to others in a way to stay on top of everything if you know what I mean.

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      TooStupid
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      Posted 1 year ago by TooStupid

      (2)~~ Well, I'm also care abt everyone and if I see something on tv and it is sad...I can put myself in there shoes and tear up right along with the people on tv. But I do it better than anyone else. People say it's a gift. But I love how your poem is deep in many different ways. I'm looking for someone to enter my life that is the same way as me. I date but I'm getting sick of that. So I just continue being me and helping others with there problems. I have saved over 25 relationships. Wow..lol.I have just told you a lot..anyway, nice poem..very touching..!

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      Posted 1 year ago by DarthRickon

      thats an amazing poem, it paints a picture in my head...