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Poem for Meet and Greet

November 4, 2008

Yahoo! I'm in for the Nov 24th/08 Meet and Greet! I can't wait. Here is a poem that I am planning on giving Criss that night. To me it sums up this incredible journey he's been on. Cheers, Loyals!!

TAKE THE ROAD THAT'S NOT YET TRAVELLED

They say you are the "It Factor" within your sultry core------------------------------------------------ A polished, shrewd magician like we've never seen before.

Full of drive and perseverance there's an edge within your flare-------------------------------------- An undeniable conviction we admire beyond compare.

To the best you've been compared to but there's substance in your game------------------------- For those following in your footsteps don't hold a candle to your name.

You have raw but natural talent, a component you possess------------------------------------------- Just one piece within the puzzle that connects you to success.

As an artist you're outstanding, have made your mark in such short time----------------------- The possibilities are endless as you're only in your prime.

A persona...smooth yet energized, has a rich, charismatic flavour----------------------------------- It penetrates the heart and soul, leaves a taste we want to savour.

Your stage presence is electric and connects to signify---------------------------------------------- That within each illusion you perform our emotions amplify.

You can captivate an audience, soul-stirred and mesmerized---------------------------------------- By your enticing disposition that's so easy on the eyes.

There's screaming girls, there's swarming crowds...like a rock star on a stage----------------- Just to get one glimpse of you in a swooning, frenzy rage.

You're melting in the hearts of fans, all magically enchanted------------------------------------------ And with sincere yet deep-felt thanks never once take them for granted.

But I think what stands out most of all much too your fans' appeal----------------------------------- Is that your're honest in your image, and you're gracious, and you're real.

All of which rings true for you, you're demeanor we adore------------------------------------------- But within that awesome talent I think there's something more.

I believe that individuals are born into this world-------------------------------------------------------- With a certain kind of purpose unknown 'till it's uncurled.

You're faced with solid choices all of which are freely yours----------------------------------------- Each choice will lead you down a path, some with open and shut doors.

You struggle, stumble, persevere...frustrations bring you low-------------------------------------- Each winding path will humble you, through the process you will grow.

Walking blindly you pursue "it" as you long for clarity------------------------------------------------- Knowing something must be out there though you're searching aimlessly.

And then one day, you see it! Another road that looks the same----------------------------------- But it's one that's not yet travelled and it's calling out your name.

You always knew the path to magic ran the deepest to your soul---------------------------------- And so for you, New York Broadway, was the venue to your goal.

Friendly timing was impeccable and with help from luck and fate--------------------------------- They led you onward with great ease for this road you took turned straight.

No jags, no curves, no rocks to climb...no obstacles to dread-------------------------------------- And for once there was no resistance just clear sailing up ahead.

So this "It Factor" cannot appear unless you find your way that's rare---------------------------- Down the path that holds your calling...it's "finding it" that takes you there.

It's taken you where you've never been, you feel purpose and self-control---------------------- There's no more asking, "Am I there yet?", because contentment's in your soul.

And as it's all fallen into place for you from this road that was unknown------------------------- You've begun to taste life's pleasures for you know you're truly home.

With a talent riding on your wings remain grounded in this light----------------------------------- Let success not change the one you are for conceit's not in your flight.

Just remember where you came from, the foundation of who you are--------------------------- And embrace what's truly in your heart for this road will take you far.

And no matter where it leads you through your life and your career------------------------------- When the papers read, "He's got it!", know the journey's what brought you here.

Keep the passion----it will drive you...keep the faith----prayer's on your side-------------------- And like written in that fairlytale, "Let your conscience be your guide."

You're a man who's touched this industry, through your magic you have strived-------------- And when you say, "I'm thankful for my blessings!"....well, Criss Angel-------------------------- We're just THANKFUL you arrived!!

Ellen Smith hummer 265 copyright

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      Posted 1 year ago by Max_Angel

      That's...one of the most perfect things I've ever read. I'm holding back tears right now, I bet it will have the same affect on Criss. It's beautiful, good job.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Thandie

      Cool poem!

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      Posted 1 year ago by KeepnItFunky

      That is so perfect! I absolutely love it and Criss will too!

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      Posted 1 year ago by lilred64

      Wow. That was pretty intense. I am in awe. The flow was flawless and writing legal briefs for a living, I know how hard it is to keep an edge to something, keep it flowing and keep it interesting and on point. You hit the nail on the head. A+

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      Posted 1 year ago by Justinillusion

      Hey...That poem is wonderful...He will be honored to have such a dedicated fan...I know I would be...haha......great job though

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      Posted 1 year ago by mindfreaknicole

      Wonderful poem, Ellen! I know he'll love it.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Gina2cali

      Congrats on winning!