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Dancing Under the Moon

February 24, 2009

a poem...a dream

Sitting here

Twittling my fingers

Analyzing my silver pen

And listening to music of goodbyes

Thinking of my future

And things I wish to do

Someday I hope for success

Comfort, love, money

The normalcy of usual wants

But if I think deeper

I find I wish for more

And dream of things

That other would look upon as odd

I wish to dance around an open fire

A long simple gown swirling around my feet

My hair long and free

With the curls bouncing around my face

As I spin with a tamborine in my hands

Spinning to the sound of flutes and pipes

As the men playing the drums sit around the fire

Others dance with me around the flames

Carrying anything that makes music

As we watch the fire dance to our tunes

Standing under the moonlight

And spinning to the continious music

Being one with the song and the sky

Sensing the touch of open freedom

The freedom to dance and fly

With no bars, traps, or boundaries

The freedom to sink into a peaceful sleep

Of no worries and frustrating sadness

Letting the stars shine through my eyes

And the flames light radiate off my skin

As I continue to dance and play to the music

It's a dream

One out of many

Taking form in my head

Music inspired

Picturing a still picture of myself

Caught in mid sway

Eyes closed

My black curly hair flowing down my back

As I hold a round tamborine in my arm

My left hand held in mid air

Reaching up to softly pound its soft drum

Surrounded by round flat bells

Ready to fill the air

With a cheerful chime of small symbols

As my long peach gown

Flows to the floor in a soft sway

All held in perfect stillness

As the girls playing along side me

Held in similiar peaceful positions

The drummers seated around us

Held with one hand in the air

The other hand resting on the drum

The look of joy and happiness

Covering everyones faces

Some held in mid laughter

As the fine continues to crackle

Reaching for the sky

The tips disappearing into the unknown

The still images displaying perfect peace

It's something I wish for

happiness, joy peace, music

Dancing around a fire

Playing without a care in the world

Under a moonlit sky

With friends and family

In the same frame of mind

As I hope to be.

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      like hinder. love the other 3. u listen 2 kid rock?

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      i don't listen 2 em. they have good music, but the singers voice is 2 whiney

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      amy was great with seether but i like taylor better

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      she's my favorite singer of any genre. i did have her 1st cd, but i lost it. i wish i hadn't. i really wish i could see her in concert

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      i like a little bit of punk. a country musicion u should listen 2 is taylor swift

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      carrie underwood is good. try listenin 2 jason aldean. he's from the county just north of mine

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      u tried listenin 2 it?

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      Posted 7 months ago by goretcki

      if i were u i wouldn't care all that much about tests

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      Posted 8 months ago by owen

      hey my friend how are you ? all my coents seems the same .. no but thisi s new .. hows school ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?? owen

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      Posted 8 months ago by owen

      hey erica how are you ? ........... .. .. . . . . .. . . . ......... . ...