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Breath of Life, Kiss of Death?

November 24, 2008

He said he would die for me, why can't he live for me to.

Standing in the dark side of moon Waiting for the shadow to cover the scar Found in every corner of the heart A small wound that never was known Until it grew

He said he would love me forever He said he would be there for me He said he would always hold me He said he would die for me Why can't he live for me to

Why would I wish him dead Can't he see I love him I cherish him, he's my life He tells me he would die for me I tell him i will live for him

The feeling of the here and now Not the before and not the after Living the moment and not the later Not waiting for what is to happen Just falling for the present moments

Don't tell me you will die I want to hear you will live I want to be your breath of life Not your kiss of death

I want to be your reason You wake up each morning with a smile I want to be the one That hugs you close each time your hurt Cares for your every sick and sorrow

Why can't I be that person Why can't i be your life I want you to love me while you live Not wait to love me in the moment of death By then it's too late for us both.

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    • Photo of ericyr ericyr
      ericyr
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      Posted 1 year ago by ericyr

      and this is something i hear all the time...people say it w/o out actually thinking

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      Posted 1 year ago by redfox

      wow.... I dont write things like this, due to how depressing it is.... Selfish, is the label i give this character.

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      ericyr
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      Posted 1 year ago by ericyr

      thank you...i really appreciate that...i'm kind of a begginer writer :P i'm still learning

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      LOYAL CHICA WAITING UP TOP OF THE CASTLE WAITING FOR HER PRINCE TO COME AND GET HER BEARING CHICKEN AND RICE
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      Posted 1 year ago by jessrn71

      Don't tell me you will die I want to hear you will live I want to be your breath of life Not your kiss of death

      I really love the above line. You really can express yourself freely thru your writing...I am the same way...thoughts just come streaming some times!

      Thanks for keeping it real!

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      ericyr
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      Posted 1 year ago by ericyr

      i know how u feel...i've had not one relationship that i can say ever went well...i regret everything...i'm just glad i never did anything that would have messed up my life.

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      AnnaILY
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      Posted 1 year ago by AnnaILY

      yeah i mean idk y guys lie soooo much i hate it when they do they hurt me so much