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Angel with Broken Wings By Christine L

September 24, 2009

There were two Angels up in Heaven that were deeply in love, They got separated down to earth. the male was very successful but the female was not. She was dealing with a lot of pain and sorrow. Every time she got hurt or sinned her wing would be broken in places without her knowing she had them, Searching for her lost love she would look up to the sky. Then one day she meet this man and there lips touched, Then they both felt something strange as there wings started to rip though the skin, both screaming in pain. People started to crowed around seeing this strange sight. She became Afraid and tried to run away as she flew few feet off she kept on falling, Slamming herself on the ground. As the male was searching for her up in the sky. He notice something floating in the water with white wings, He sweeps down grabbing her in his arms closely to keep her safe. When she woke up, She notice that she was in a nice big bed. Then she notice her wings bleeding like her skin and in so much pain. She hears a voice . It was her heavenly love checking up on her seeing if she was okay. He told her he has a Priest that he truly trust that could help her heal. So she spoken to the Priest confessing her sins and telling him all her past and as she was doing that her wings started to heal one part at a time. the Priest told her to pray and she was happy again, Then the day came that they would get married. Happy she was that she have found her heavenly love. They had the most Beautiful wedding that anyone could have ever seen..

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      Posted 3 weeks ago by Mindfreakluver09

      that story gets better everytime i read it!!!!

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      Posted 3 weeks ago by Teresa13

      I hope u don't mind but I really love this story so if it is ok I am going to place it on my site too.

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      Posted 3 weeks ago (changed 3 weeks ago) by Teresa13

      Christine that is a really beautiful romantic love story.You should write more,or even become an author.

      Love it Tara

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      Posted 1 month ago by ch3n_4il1

      it's a beautiful story..i love happy ending.i think her heavenly love means her true love.i do believe there's true love in this life.Gambarou.. Chris san.

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      Posted 1 month ago by ShineDown

      that is such a nice poem ur verey talented cant wait to read more if u do anymore

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      Posted 1 month ago by sakhmet

      wow that was beautiful. you should write more. thanx for telling me

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      Posted 1 month ago by Eve_17

      Thanx For The Add!!! :DD OOOHHH And Your Story Is Boom!!! I Hecka Like It!!!! :DD

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      Posted 1 month ago by CrissFreakGirl18

      That is an amazing story! Very touching.

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      Hay going to homecoming until 11:00pm Talk to you later!!!!

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      Posted 2 months ago by Teresa13

      For halloween I dressed up as an angel my mom made me a beautiful white gown with wings and a halo.