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night

April 27, 2009

this is a poem i thought up today. hope you guys like it.

i look at the stars at night wishing i could find my knight

i wait for him to come but noone comes

how long should i wait is it my fate

for me to find my knight will he come tonight

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    • Photo of the_power the_power
      the_power
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      Posted 5 months ago by the_power

      that was an amazing poem

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      ...and Amun was gliding over the waters, all alone, and spoke `Come to me` and the falcon opened its eyes and sun rose...
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      Posted 6 months ago by Lilith_Inana

      Hey great, I love poems and you and your knight will find each other when time comes. I believe that there are no incidents and that everything happens at the right time... Regards

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      iljanalion
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      Posted 6 months ago by iljanalion

      At least you are waiting on someone. I just seem to wait for pay day and transportation. Anyway, ,maybe you should get out and about so that the knight can find you and may you meet in a nice place.