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Ojike vs Luke pt.III

August 18, 2008

Warning: The Following contains harsh language some might not find suitable for minors.

“Ladies and Gentlemen I’d like to thank you all for coming to the show. For my next trick this is something I’ve been working on for many years. It cannot and shouldn’t be repeated and most importantly it has to be performed BY A PSYCHOPATHIC PROFESSIONAL!”-he continued, walking towards the tank, clapping mockingly at Ojike. “Your mind is the key that will set you free Ojike”-Luke laughed as he knocked on the glass watching as Ojike tried to free himself. He turned, walking to his seat as the sound of cracking glass began to echo through his eardrums. Luke turned to see Ojike freed from the straightjacket, banging on the glass to free himself. “No..”-Luke uttered in shock Ojike continued punching the wall of glass harder and harder as the cracks grew larger. “NO…NO…”-his voice grew louder as he continued to watch on running towards the chamber as it shattered, the water running everywhere. “NOOOOOOO!!!”-Luke shouted hysterically putting his hands on his against his head as Ojike emerged from his watery prison wet and alive. He looked on as Luke yell at his failed efforts to destroy him. Luke gazed at Ojike with a devilish stare. “You’ll pay for that.”-Luke cursed “Oh what’s the matter? You can’t handle having your “tricks” go wrong?”-Ojike taunted “How DARE YOU insult my art!”-Luke shouted at Ojike “You know what your problem is.”-He paused glancing over at some of the steel supports that held up the water chamber then back at Luke. “You talk too much”-Ojike said, ripping the steel tubing from the chamber. He ran with it towards Luke impaling him through the stomach as Luke stumbled back. He cussed and grunted in pain as Ojike lifted him up slightly, thrusting him and the tubing together into the wall behind him. Luke’s body began to slowly stop moving as he dangled there in mid air hanging against cold steel. Ojike smirked walking towards Luke as he shook his head trying to dry himself from the remaining water in his hair. “I gave you the chance to walk away but you didn’t take my out.”-he smiled a little bit taking a deep breath point at Luke. “Although I have to admit you’re a pretty tough”-Ojike paused “But I am better”- he got right in Luke’s face “Too bad you’re dead though, you’re talent is a rarity these days. Oh well…”-he laughed again. Suddenly Ojike felt a pain around his neck looking down to see Luke’s hand around it. He looked back up at his face to see Luke with his eyes wide open and smiling. “You didn’t think it would be that easy would it?”-Luke laughed pushing his body through the tubing moving Ojike back as he progressed forward. “What don’t you get? This is My World. I make the rules! Not you!”-his grip hardened around Ojike’s neck. “I’d like to thank you Ojike. If not for you I might not of had the chance to display all of my talents. So here we are. You and Me”-Luke began to laugh hysterically

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      Posted 1 year ago by Leeka

      Wow, I finally got around to reading this and I have to say.......BRAVO! these were awsome, Luke is badass! Can't wait for more.

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      Posted 1 year ago by WendyAngel

      I love it lol, cant wait for more ;-)

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      Posted 1 year ago by xxBritishGothxx

      love it man cant wait for more :D you wer made for art

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      Posted 1 year ago by Amystika19

      I want more!!!! It's just awesome!!!! Agree with code! Luke is some ........ !!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by Code_of_the_Arts

      Nooo.. wat a tease.. again Luke is some sick ((censored)) my my.. how this fight wit illusion gonna end.. Great job!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by angel319

      Damn it!!!! Want more!!! Dude,this is off the damn chain. U can have ur own stories,and criss would love them! Waiting for pt 4&5 next.

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      Posted 1 year ago by redfox

      wow.... you should really think about making this a series... not bad at all.

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      Posted 1 year ago by magicgirl08

      amazing you brought me in to your word you have such a fantastic talent i feel there is a book and a movie deal out there for you

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      WOW! That was intense! You've got quite the talent...I cant wait for more!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by AvRiL_CriSS

      awesome , i like it too