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When you see

August 17, 2008

My poem see what you think!!!

When you see all that you can you see nothing. Open your mind and see everything not just what you want. I see you with her and me alone with nothing but the cold. what will i do wait for you? The open streets free as can be but also a prison so those who speak and do what they beLIEve in. what will i do? sit and wonder or stand and become? what is left is not what has gone or is going. Try to see what is coming not what is gone. for all those who see you see truth for all those who walk blindly follow what the feel i walk BOTH so i can become.

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      wow great work keep writing!!=}}

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      wow that is really good and deep and i have no words to speak b/c that was so good keep up that good work i love it!!