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Poem 27

November 29, 2008

My newest Poem is showing a bit of me i would say. Read it and leave a comment please.

Its called " Emotions"

Emotions

I set my mind free my Angel and it feels like flying I raise my voice and it’s like the world will listen to me My Soul speaks out loud my Angel and it feels like singing My heart opens up and it’s like now I become what I can be

I feel free my Angel the shadows are gone forever I can see the world with the eyes of a child My Life is full of Magic my Angel and that will leave me never My Fantasy is running wild

I feel like a star in heaven my Angel glowing and shining I am closer to find my own path, my own way My Dreams are close and that’s why I feel like smiling I feel good now and I want that feeling to stay

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    • Photo of Inuyama Inuyama
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      Hey guys I made a new page because I'm not going to use this one anymore my new name is LOVE15
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      Posted 1 year ago by Inuyama

      wow it's really good read mine

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      don't believe your eyes.
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      Posted 1 year ago by shagen

      that's really beautiful...

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      yadier molina albert pujols # 4 # 5 forever
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      Posted 1 year ago by amberbooo

      wow so beautiful '=)

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      Still here Loyals! lol
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      Posted 1 year ago by Amystika19

      Its a nice one. It says you are closer to find you path....I just hope to find mine soon.

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      ~~The haunting Journey inside the mind of Criss Angel, +Believe+
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      Posted 1 year ago by jessie_lov169108

      i love the poem very very beautiful =). Loyal~Jessie

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      Posted 1 year ago by ma

      I don´t know if I´ve told you this but I´m not a girl full of words...all I can say is that I liked it and it´s really really nice :)

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      Posted 1 year ago by Code_of_the_Arts

      ooh I see some light in those emotions... nice poem!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by Seretonin

      beautiful is all what will come out of my mouth......(speechless)