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Poem 27

November 29, 2008

My newest Poem is showing a bit of me i would say. Read it and leave a comment please.

Its called " Emotions"

Emotions

I set my mind free my Angel and it feels like flying I raise my voice and it’s like the world will listen to me My Soul speaks out loud my Angel and it feels like singing My heart opens up and it’s like now I become what I can be

I feel free my Angel the shadows are gone forever I can see the world with the eyes of a child My Life is full of Magic my Angel and that will leave me never My Fantasy is running wild

I feel like a star in heaven my Angel glowing and shining I am closer to find my own path, my own way My Dreams are close and that’s why I feel like smiling I feel good now and I want that feeling to stay

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      STAY OUT OF MY MIND AND GET INTO MY HEART THAT IS THE KEY TO START AND MAKE ART
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      Posted 10 months ago by christara

      Those words are comforting.It is really good.

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      Posted 10 months ago by Starchild70

      Wow! das kommt richtig gut!!!

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      Posted 11 months ago by LIZA

      it is beautiful, i loved it,you write beautiful poetry!!!!

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      Posted 11 months ago by LovelyMetalhead

      Made me smile. I love it! ^_^

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      Negativity NEVER EVER breeds anything positive - Criss Angel
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      Posted 11 months ago by MichaeleL

      What a BEAUTIFUL poem! Simply lovely..... I love the "I can see the world with the eyes of a child". Wonderful sentiment....... Thanks so much for sharing. : )

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      I'm still here...sometimes in NINJA mode, lol but still around! Miss you guys!
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      Posted 1 year ago (changed 1 year ago) by JeanieAnn

      Hallo Susanne! Der ton gefaellt mir sehr...voller hoffnung und positive energy. Wie immer danke ich dir furs teilen....(((hugs)))

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      hej, ja gefällt mir. denke daß du auf dem besten weg bist DICH wieder zu finden

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      You raise me up so I can stand on mountains. You raise me up to walk on stormy seas...
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      Posted 1 year ago by LadyOmega

      This one has such a positive feeling to it... I hope it means you're not so depressed anymore. Criss would adore this one, just like all the others. xo

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      Posted 1 year ago by LoyalPhantom

      wow i really love this one!!!!!! keep on writing them poems im always looking forward to reading them!!!!!!!!!!!!!