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Poem 26

October 26, 2008

My newest Poem its a long one but please read it. And leave comments

Its called

"The loyal Heart full of Shadows"

A Loyal heart full of Shadows is searching For light and Hope that it can beat again The loyal heart full of Shadows found an Angel trapped by humans Begging that he could fly home

The loyal Heart full of Shadows answers his craving Without wanting anything in return The Angel could see the pure Soul gleaming trough the Shadows And started to show the loyal Heart full of Shadows respect

The loyal Heart full of Shadows wanted to ask the Angel a Question Dear Angel why was you trapped here? The Angel said look around loyal Heart full of Shadows The world yaws after so many different things and misses so much

So much love is lost, So many dreams break to pieces Because the Humans don’t listen to each other So much Anger straggles trough the humans hearts Although they should help one another

The Humans are lost in their Greed But still there is a loyal Heart full of Shadows trapped like I was And trough all the hurting your soul is gleaming and shining so bright So much that my Angel heart wish to sing because of Joy and gratefulness

There is still Hope for the World and Mankind Your heart and Soul will give back Your strong heart the Freedom And your kindness Soul the life

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    • Photo of Teresa13 Teresa13
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      Posted 1 year ago by Starchild70

      Das hat Tiefgang!!! im warsten Sinne des Wortes...es geht unter die Haut. Klasse!!!

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      You raise me up so I can stand on mountains. You raise me up to walk on stormy seas...
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      Posted 1 year ago by LadyOmega

      It about says it all, I think. Beautiful as always.

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      don't believe your eyes.
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      Posted 1 year ago by shagen

      wow, love ya and the poem!! and you should definitely send it to Criss.

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      yadier molina albert pujols # 4 # 5 forever
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      Posted 1 year ago by amberbooo

      wow this is great ..............just like all ur poems..............yeah like the loyal under me said ...u sould send it to criss..........love ya ................

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      Still here Loyals! lol
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      Posted 1 year ago by Amystika19

      Aww a great one again! I really think you should snd this one to Criss.

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      Focus on where you want to go, not on what you fear!!!
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      Posted 1 year ago by LoyalPhantom

      I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      Check out the LovelyLoyalNetwork: youtube.com/user/LovelyLoyalNetwork
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      Posted 1 year ago by LovelyMetalhead

      : 3 It is so beautiful

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      Believe, Love & Live
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      Posted 1 year ago (changed 1 year ago) by Love4U

      Once again U've written another beautiful poem. From Your Heart & Soul, U have given us something to read & understand....................Love U'r Loyal Friend, Natalie

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      Hey guys I made a new page because I'm not going to use this one anymore my new name is LOVE15
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      Posted 1 year ago by Inuyama

      omg i am so jel u r so good luv u