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Poem 25

October 18, 2008

My newest Poem ( please leave a comment ) Its a sad one

Its called

" Soulnight "

I feel lost and alone every minute of every day I feel so cold and numb inside I feel my scars more then ever before I feel my heart beating but it doesn’t have a reason Is there anyone who hears the silent cry of my wounded soul? An Angel hears my silent cry

I see my life passing me by so fast I see no light in the darkness I see so much joy around me but I don’t feel it I see my lonely heart breaking Is there anyone who hears a breaking heart? An Angel hears my heart break

I listen to my tears which fall down from my face I listen to my breath so slow close to stopping I listen to every silent scream I want to do I listen to the far away whispers of my fading dreams Is there anyone who hears a fading dream whisper? An Angel hears my dreams whisper

And an Angel comes to save me He whispers softly never give up Fight for your dreams I will always be there in your heart and soul And keep you warm inside.

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      Posted 1 year ago by MajesticLozza

      Beautiful! very emotional!

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      Posted 1 year ago by scribbles

      omg that is toucning, whenever i gulp when im reading poems...it means its touching ..lol, but really that is amazing

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      Posted 1 year ago by metalchix

      ah you can really feel the emotion iin this one

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      Posted 1 year ago by Leeka

      Wow, this is a really good and touching poem. I love it!

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      Posted 1 year ago by trishluvscriss

      wow!!!that was amazin!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by LoyalPhantom

      wow i love it!!! i think this one is the best yet!!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago by freebird56

      Thats really good also sad but so true you have an Angel watching over you always. Keep on writing and expressing your dreams.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Code_of_the_Arts

      Im luving dat u have an angel looking upon u hun.. Keep expressing ur feeling through ur poems, which u do wonderfully.

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      Posted 1 year ago by ForeverLoyal66

      that is really good!!!

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      Posted 1 year ago (changed 1 year ago) by Inuyama

      oh wow that is really good i love it