Mindfreakwitch's Blog

Poem 23

October 2, 2008

My newest Poem and its a long one

Its called

" Sometimes "

Sometimes you are like the sun Your heart and soul are shining through every dark Sometimes you are laughing And it lights up my world

Sometimes you are like the rain You cry and the emotions break to the surface Sometimes tears roll down your face And the world stands still for a while

Sometimes you are like stars Your light shines down on everybody Sometimes they could feel guidance and Inspiration And this can change the world

Sometimes you are like the moon You are hiding when the day comes up Sometimes you feel like everyone is against you And you feel alone

But it doesn’t matter if you laugh or cry Your good heart and your love is always there For everyone to see who needs help It doesn’t matter if you are hiding or shine like a star Your Soul is pure Inspiration and Guidance For anyone who needs it.

Sometimes an Angel comes to you And gives back all the love and help you gave to others.

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    • Photo of Teresa13 Teresa13
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      Posted 1 month ago by Teresa13

      Your poems are really good.I hope you win in the contests.

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      Posted 1 year ago by IslandAngel

      the way you express your feelings for Criss touch all of our hearts because you are able to say what we are thinking so poetically....thank you for that....xo

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      Posted 1 year ago by magicgirl08

      u truely have a gift and a talent with words thanks for letting me read this

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      Posted 1 year ago by Leeka

      I love this poem, its really beautiful. Can't wait for the next one.

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      Posted 1 year ago by LoyalPhantom

      very very very grrrr!!!!! there are no words to explain its magnifcents!!!! your really good at writting peoms!! keep it up im always looking forward to reading them

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      Posted 1 year ago by Mysteree_DiamondEyes

      Beautiful words to describe a beautiful man with a gift! Thank you for sharing you're very talented!

      I love it :)

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      Posted 1 year ago by crissylove

      Love it, love it love it=)

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      Posted 1 year ago by VoOdOoCHiLd

      Beautiful very inspirational.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Miss_Missi

      I Have to say this is your best yet ! thank you for explaining the Loyals emotions and dedication to Our Angel !

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      I'm still here...sometimes in NINJA mode, lol but still around! Miss you guys!
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      Posted 1 year ago by JeanieAnn

      Also wie kannst du sagen dass talent da nicht mit spielt? Ubung hilft vielleicht ein wenig aber es ist doch talent dass hilft dass die worter richtig kommen. Dieses gedicht is wunderbar....I love the juxtaposition of emotions. Thank you again so much for sharing your art with all of us!