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New poem

April 16, 2009

The Poem is called

" Tears like Rain "

When Tears fall like Rain My dreams are washed away My inner Light is darkened by the Clouds And my Heart beats faster then a Lightning hits

When Tears fall like Rain Hope is just a small drop of water In all this Painful Rain It’s oh so hard to find

When Tears fall like Rain Every move is soaking you to the core Every Minute feels like an hour And every Smile is just a Fake

When Tears fall like Rain Then all you can do is to wait for the sun And your memories keep you warm And every little Heartbeat is a Whisper to heaven.

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      STAY OUT OF MY MIND AND GET INTO MY HEART THAT IS THE KEY TO START AND MAKE ART
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      Posted 1 month ago by Teresa13

      Hey your poems are really good.I joined this one site www.poetry.com also this one really helps www.rhymezone.com I hope you win.With sister and angel Love Tara

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      Posted 5 months ago by amberbooo

      ths is so great really i thank you did a wonderful job...

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      Posted 6 months ago by Suzyqnsd

      Very emotional.... really like the ending. Nicely done.

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      Posted 6 months ago by Code_of_the_Arts

      It's good to tear out cos it releases heavy emotion.. Lovely poem...

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      There is no avoiding war it can only be postponed to the advantage of your enemy
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      Posted 7 months ago by Seretonin

      cool i like it