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A little Horror

January 10, 2009

I wrote a little Horror Shortstory and i post the parts i have already translated

Susan went at this Stormy night, like so many times before, to her confidential room in the woods. She had discovered it until one of her numerous stays here. And after she had secured this place with every Protection possible it belonged to her. She went there when she looked for Silence, Peace from a world in which the people tormented and mocked her. She searched there for shelter when Mr. Kopp was salacious and meddlesome again, or when he humiliated her for his bare pleasure.

What nobody knew was that Susan had a confidential passion as secret as this place. She indulged the Dark Arts. She knew a lot of different ways to get rid of those people but normally she tried to ignore those people or don’t even cross their way. But today Mr. Kopps indignities where meaner and hurted her really deep and now she longed for Vengeance.

As soon as she arrived at her secret place she lit up six black candles kneeled down in a Pentagram with the tip to the south and began to talk.

“In this Night I beg all Demons from Hell to assist me with my plans In this Night I want to see the Suffering of my Enemies and refresh myself on their screams In this Night I want to see their blood run and I sacrifice it to you to honour you I beg you please answer my Supplication and give me your Favour. Master of all Torments I beg for your help.”

As soon as she finished speaking the whole room started glowing as if was burning. Then Susan heard a voice deep and full of hate which made the whole room trembling. Susan bowed deeply and greeted her Lord. He said, "My child of the night, my faithful servant why do you wake me from my sleep?" Lord I beg for your help, I'm looking for revenge on a man who has made me suffering. „„My child you are powerful and beautiful as the night why do you want my help?" "Lord I want to see him truly suffer and you are a master of it, I'm just a student, your humble servant and powerless when it comes to this man. He is strong in faith and I'm weak. "" My child your request will be fulfilled, run like the wind and bring him here. “Yes, Lord," said Susan, and ran as fast as she could in the city. She found Mr. Kopp at the usual place; he came straight out of the midnight mass. "Mr. Kopp, Mr. Kopp," said Susan excited "Please come with me there was an accident in the woods and a man is hurt." Mr. Kopp said, "What happened my child?" "I do not know Mr. Kopp, I'm not a doctor and he is bleeding heavily we must hurry," said Susan. "Ok then led me out," he said. "Follow me," said Susan excitedly.

She ran ahead, and so Mr. Kopp could not see the smile she wore on her lips. After a while, they were arrived at her secret place. Mr. Kopp said, "Where is the injured man? “ "He is in here; I spend all my strength to bring him here to protect him from the cold outside." "That was a good deed Susan, God will give you a bless for your love " he said, and went inside. Susan followed him and locked the door quietly so that he doesn’t notice it. She brought him to the room where her Lord was waiting. She let him go in first and then closed this door. Mr. Kopp looked around but could not discover the man and began to wonder and to frighten and asked "what in heaven is that a place for? “ Susan kneelt down and said, "Lord, he is here as you've applied it to me." The room began to glow again and Mr. Kopp in fear which felt like a cold snake is crawling up his back so he tried to flee, but he could not stir. Then he heard the same voice Susan heard so often before. "This place belongs to my child, my most loyal servant which you have made suffering you miserable creature. I will personally ensure that this Place is your fate and your grave.

The whole room began to shake and the glow was getting intense. Susan knew what would happen; her Lord and Master would be with her in flesh and blood. In the middle of the room a portal opened up and a creature climbed out so beautiful and dark as it was deadly. Her master had revealed himself for the first time. A dark angel, wings and hair black as the Night, eyes grey like smoke. A man with a remarkable size and a well-trained physique. His body was veiled with a robe made of black silk. Susan was captivated by his appearance, and looked at him full of awe and admiration. He came up to her, took her hand and said, "you raise my child you do not have to kneel in front of me, you are worthy to stand on my side." "I thank you Lord," said Susan reverently and stood up. "My child, I'm no longer your master," he said "now we are one together as it should be, so call me with my name." Susan was beside herself with joy and asked "how is your name?" He said, "My name is Kiran and we both are angels of Perdition". Susan asked "how can that be true I don’t have beautiful wings like you?" Kiran touched her very gently and Susan felt like a stream of power flowed through her. "Now spread your wings for me my black angel" he whispered to Susan. Susan now felt that she has wings and they are also broad, they almost darkened the entire room. She thought they where beautiful, and whispered "Thank you, Kiran”. Then they went together to Mr. Kopp who now trembles with fear like a leaf in a storm.

"Low creature," said Kiran "look at us, we who we are your end." Mr. Kopp stammered "w what do you want from me?" Susan said, "We want to see you suffering and your Anxiety and we want to hear your Screams. We want to see the last spark of life in your eyes extinguished. "" We want to see how your blood soaks this holy ground and your breath flows out of you just like your blood. We want retribution miserable creature „Kiran added. Mr. Kopp was staring at the two and wanted to scream for help but he couldn’t with one hand movement Kiran has cut through Mr. Kopps throat. Susan looked at how this man's blood soaked the earth and smiled. Mr. Kopp gargled and coughed from his own blood. Unable to say even one word. For a few minutes, the two Angels stared to the dying man. He tried to fight against his death with all the power he had but it was to late. Susan got tired to watch him fight and ripped his still beating heart from the chest and then threw it as waste on the ground.

The black Angels watched as the last spark of life in him extinguished, and went out together and then with a laugh disappeared in the darkness.

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      Posted 5 months ago by Atropaia

      na das klingt nach mehr,wann kommt die fortsetzung???

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      Posted 9 months ago by Amystika19

      Whoa that's nice...Is there a second part? I want to read it! :)

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      *Other night she spends alone without his touch his skin so could.. say you love me..*
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      Posted 11 months ago by criss_grl

      wow!! I think that your story might kick my stories butt!! lol i love it!!!!

      Love you Dani

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      I liked it a lot! Great job :)

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      Posted 11 months ago by Seretonin

      this is great!!! love it is there more? hope so oh btw this almost reminds me of another anime called Hellgirl u should check that out its really good