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December 10, 2008

I was so inspired by BElieVE that I decided to write a story. I'd like to tell you about the ideas I have floatin around in my head so for more info read on.......

Ok, so it would center around me of course and Criss would eventually be introduced as a guide/big brother/protecter type character. I don't have much other than potential names for Criss' character. Also I was juggling wether or not he should have a twin. It would be a mirror image of Criss. Not for any reason in particular just because the story would be somewhat dream like. I have locations as well. A desert, just sand and dunes as far as the eye could see. A sea of of blood. A market place within castle walls sort of like Troy. Then a forest its a strange forest though. The ground is cracked and dry with small dead trees growing outta the ground but they are scattered here an there not in a cluster. So tell me what you think. Also I need a look, of what Criss will look like throughout the whole story. If you have ANY ideas, any at all leave me a message and we can brainstorm. Thanks again!

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      Posted 10 months ago by LoyalRachelKerico

      That's a great idea! I think it will make a wonderful story! I think you should make Criss look like himself and have his same personality he already has.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Reno_R_Psychopathic

      Hmmm, na man I don't think I'd be the right person to play that part. I follow my own path and that's your dream dude not mine. If that's something u wanna do then go 4 it man. You can accomplish anything u set ur mind to. That saying is actually completely true as well. Anyway yeah that's a really great idea dude. u got a nice foundation here. So now u can build on that & hammer out the details over time

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      Posted 1 year ago by loyalfreak4eva

      well the desert can be hot{like criss lol} so criss should either be shirtless or have a vest short cut hair glasses shorts or pants shoes of corse and if hes shirtless he should defanitly have his 8 pac lol maybey hat or hankercife wait no glasses i think i have somthing ok shirtless well he has his shirt over his head no over his shoulders cowboy hat like in the bull episode pants shoes he looks tired and looks like he looking for something and eyeliner a mystifing look he looks completeley HAWT!!!!!!!! lol so how bout tht

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      Posted 1 year ago by mindfreaknicole

      Yeah, I too can't provide much help with this department, but the ideas you have so far sound great!

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      Posted 1 year ago by Gina2cali

      Unfortunately I am not talented in this department. I wish I could give you more input. Your ideas are very good so far.

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      Posted 1 year ago by jessrn71

      Hmmm...Criss first off should look either a desert dweller or a supernatural being. But you can go for the look of him in the show where he has that Bull fighting outfit on that kerchief on his head. All of this kind of takes me back to the first beginning in Mindfreak...and you could branch out and have these places visited with his "family" cast of characters and him acting like Moses taking them to the inter realms of reality and illusion, a spritual journey I suppose. Let me think about it more...

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      Posted 1 year ago by amberbooo

      what do you mean sorry i dont know you r talking abouta story but what story see i am slow

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      Posted 1 year ago (changed 1 year ago) by amberbooo

      i dont know what to do sorry i ama slow girl =(