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New Poem: Reaching Success

March 26, 2009

The is a poem i wrote for english class plz comment!!!

People don't think I could do it They don't believe that I Can reach my goals an dreams If i at least try.

People don't think I can make it in this world They don't know the real me So it's my job to show thew All the wonderful things that I can be.

Life is but a journey It's your choice what you make it There is one chance to shine But do you choose to take it?

These are thoughts from my mind They are someone else's inspiration I just thought I'd like to share A piece of my creation.

I know it's not easy If you want to reach success But besides believing in yourself You have to believe in the rest.

LET ME KNOW WHAT U THINK:) LOYAL4LIFE<3

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      mini_shy
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      Posted 3 months ago by mini_shy

      thats an amazing poem i bet you got an a+ :D

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      michelle1107
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      I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT CRISS ANGEL . WHAT IS THERE NOT TO LOVE. FOR ME TIME STOPS. THE ONE AND ONLY CRISS ANGEL. BRAVO
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      Posted 3 months ago by michelle1107

      I got goos bumps. I have just fallin in love with your poem.

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      I saw Criss Angel Believe and it was the bomb and much more. ^//////^
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      Posted 3 months ago by Laceeye

      It's nice and it flows. Check out my poems on my page and comment. One is Oh My Dream Lover and the other is Winter threw an Princes eyes from the view threw his Castle walls. Comment please. X3

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      trynarose
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      Posted 6 months ago by trynarose

      nice poem

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      KrissAngel1313
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      Toronto, CA
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      Don't let what other people do upset u. Be in control of your actions. That's gives u control - not them. Happiness is the best revenge:)
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      Posted 7 months ago by KrissAngel1313

      I like it. I think you should print it and give it to Criss, he would really enjoy that!

      Kriss Angel 1313