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One More Broken Heart

December 10, 2008

Just a story i wrote,, more like a poem... It didnt turn out that good... It seems like im trying to hard... I wont get mad if you agree, i know when i do a horrible job.

As she lay there, eyes closed yet wide awake Getting lost in her thoughts, her heart opened wide But why give it away when she knows it will break? You know every night that she has cried You know she has cried for you Was this your intention? Her heart breaking more and more by the second She can't take the tension, she wants to get away They say you cant run from your problems But is it just that you cant run from your problems forever? You held her tight but in the end Her life ended with a knife in her back No more tension No more heart As she pulls out the knife stained with her blood She begins to cry Shes fading away from you now Shes fading away from all of us... Do you feel guilty? Dont you feel horrible? A broken heart has led to death My words are pathetic But so are you So am I She lays on the cold ground Bloody knife beside her The ground is cold Now she fades away to nothing She fades with the wind into nothing but dust This isnt only your fault it is mine as well...

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      nice.....i like it