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My Eternal Dream...

November 18, 2008

Read this and let me know what you think And Be HONEST!... thank you my loyals...

From my balcony window I look out into the streets below... its late into the night...

and the moon's blue haze faintly dances on the smooth curves of my face... I think of

only you... A tear streams down my face... wishing that time would stand still...

because time has been cruel to me lately... the days wonder by and the nights I lay

awake in my bed crying for you to only come back home... grasping and holding my

chest... almost feeling my very heart stop beating... I look up into the endless

skyies... becoming enclosed by the darkness I see your face... I try to reach out to

you... barely touching your hand and I slip away... calling out to you... please dont

leave me... I love you!... but your gone again... now only the remembrance of your

face haunts me in my dreams... the way I would gaze at you with my dark eyes and

how you use to kiss me so tenderly... the way we used to lay still next to one another

in the cande light... while you would so gently touch my navel caresing the curves of

my body... playing and entwinding your fingers with mine...You kiss me then pull

away biting my lower lip... the sweet love we once shared... our intamicy that I once

thought would never shatter is now gone... Now I lay here with no one... all alone in

wonder...have you found another love...? what it is you could be doing in the

moment's passing time...as the night moves on by I take my last breath... forever

permenently seperating us... just what you wanted my sweet love... as my heart

beats for you one last time...

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      MAC
      Male, 17
      Santa Fe, NM
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      Posted 1 year ago by MAC

      That sounds like a good and bad dream. The intimacy is what we all hunger for but to have it taken from you is devastating.....I had a dream like this once. The scary part is that it seems to be altered and real at the same time. I should seriously quit drinking lol

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      themiz
      Male, 23
      lakewood, CO
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      I might be a seroget dad and I'm honored to be considered good enough for you = )
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      Posted 1 year ago by themiz

      Wow, you have an incredible way with words! Is this to I'm taking it your boyfriend? You should talk to my brother more, he love's stuff like this, as I'm sure you know already. I love it, you make it sound so..... sad but erotic all at the same time, but that is only if you listen to 16 year old guys, Mikey I'm sure will say something much more intelligent, because he loves powerful and seductive pieces.

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      redfox
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      Oblivion, WA
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      Boys and Girls of every age, wouldn't you like to see something Strange?
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      Posted 1 year ago by redfox

      I could be wrong.... but i am getting the feeling that person died in the end? died because love killed her?... uggghh... to tell you the truth, i am sick to my stomach now. I can only take so much of this stuff at once........... (but over all, it is very well written and filled with emotion. This makes it more meaningful than almost anything you can watch on T.V.)