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A Poem

March 21, 2008

My favorite poem:

Fire burning, stars alight Weaves its way through darkest night One ember can cause bright flame But blown quite quickly as it came

Water flowing, clear glass through light Curves its way through rocks of plight Though gentle ripples lap on the shore When fury comes, the peace will have torn

Air is blowing, swift with wind Knowledge from nature's kin Gentle breeze caresses soul Fierce gales of pain will bring toil

Earth is growing, slow and still Dreams will grow at fate's own will Steady and sound, dependent friend Until ground shakes, predict frail ends.

One line of hate, 3 lines of love One part of crows, 3 lines of doves Scales of nature intertwine With the balance of humanity, yours and mine.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Mindfreak_Missy

      Heyyy, thats a great poem :D i love it!

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      Posted 1 year ago by 713Lucky713

      sup, i'm joe. thats a great poem.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Jalyssa

      Yeah and my friend helped me when i was stuck. Thanks!

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      Posted 1 year ago by Loyal_Freak_Lacy

      Wow!! did u write that?! It's so pretty!!