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First poem I ever wrote

August 3, 2008

Take Thy Hand

Take Thy Hand

Take thy hand and hold it with thy heart.
Speek with thy sole not with your mind. Find the words that make her tremble with the feeling of all the love in the world. Treat her with love, kindness, and give her all the time in the world. Make her feel special
and let her know that you love her each and everyday...

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      Posted 1 year ago by comealive

      thats really sweet lol

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      Posted 1 year ago by redfox

      wow... i could tell it is your first poem...