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June 20, 2008

Blood in the bottle

Once there was a man his name was eric black he live in sleepy hollows he was all ways in black evening his hair was black.Theres was this woman name rose stroms she was beautiful they both feel in love with eachother until she had discovery that was human he carries this bottle with everwhere he goes,he calls it blood in the bottle rose didnt know he was a vampire until she came one day saw him drink from a woman neck,rose didnt know what to do so saw ran out the house and eric ran right behind her.But he stop runing after her and went back inside the house and sat in the chair drinking his blood in the bottle woundering what he going to do without rose. Rose came back in new york on halloween morning came to her sister becky she did not tell her what happen with her boyfriend eric she said she wanna go up stairs to laid down because she diding get no sleep after she left him.Eric was on a rampage looking for rose but didnt know where for frist he had ran into these guys wanna money from him it was 4 guys with only one gun eric didnt get scare he just look at them with a evil face the guys say give us your money,eric just look at them not saying nothing at all one of them came up to him and toch him but eric grab his arm and brokeing in half the bone was showing and his meat was hanging off his arm.The others look in shock didnt know what to do eric eyes to blood red and his teeth was show he grab another one of them bit him on his neck the other guys took off and left while eric was killing the other ones so after he was finish he rise up and yell out ROSE;;;;;;;;;;;UNTIL NEXT TIME STAY TUNE.

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      Posted 1 year ago by Reno_R_Psychopathic

      Not bad, good job

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      Posted 1 year ago by thecrow32

      cool one

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      Posted 1 year ago by Dvlboi

      very interesting can't wait for the 2nd :D

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      Posted 1 year ago by Seretonin

      pretty good i like it

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      Very good